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Post by WolfGurl on Feb 2, 2008 11:35:08 GMT -5
[glow=blue,2,300] Name:[/glow] Swiftshadow [glow=blue,2,300] Age:[/glow] 30moons [glow=blue,2,300] Gender:[/glow] Male [glow=blue,2,300] Clan:[/glow] Pasture [glow=blue,2,300] Desired Position:[/glow] Warrior [glow=blue,2,300] Personality:[/glow] He is sweet and loving. He will respect the warrior code and always the leader. He is adventurouse and bold. He is like a kit sometimes. [glow=blue,2,300] Physical Description:[/glow] He is a calico male and has a long haired tail. The rest of his is short haried. He is a rare gender cat. Half of his face is black and the other is orange and the middle is white. [glow=blue,2,300] Picture:[/glow] [glow=blue,2,300] History:[/glow] He was Clan born. His parents died and siblings left because they didnt like Clan life. He missed them but knew that Clan life was best for him. He hopes to meet them one day. [glow=blue,2,300] IC:[/glow]Swiftshadow walked around the camp. He looked at the fresh kill pile. It was low beacause of leaf-bare. He sighed and ran out of camp. He smelt rat and a little after seen it. He pounced and he had got it. By the time he went back to camp he had another mouse and a vole. [glow=blue,2,300] Code:[/glow]Whisper [glow=blue,2,300] Other:[/glow] None
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Post by [^^].Luna.[^^] on Feb 2, 2008 16:31:28 GMT -5
Can you please add on about three sentences to your personality, peltage, and history sections? Other than that the cat sounds great.
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Post by ±∞STREAMY∞± on Feb 2, 2008 17:06:08 GMT -5
The history is optional so you don't HAVE to add to it, but iit would be a lot nicer ^.^
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Post by WolfGurl on Feb 3, 2008 22:06:59 GMT -5
Modified!
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Post by [^^].Luna.[^^] on Feb 4, 2008 18:00:39 GMT -5
Accepted, but please try to make your bios longer next time. Since this is your first its ok, but try for more description next time. Thanks!
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